Mom Was Right, Keep Your Room Clean by: Emma O.
“You never know what you have… until you clean your room “ - Unknown.
According to Tess Panzer aka the editor and writer for Yahoo news, keeping a clean room can lower stress levels, make you look better, make you more social, and even help you get to work on time. This is because you donʻt have to scramble through unorganized drawers looking for things. Some people say a messy room equals a creative mind, however the benefits of a clean room outweigh any of the negative impacts, if there really are any.
Who likes being late to class or work?...... no one! Having a clean room means that all of your junk drawers are organized, which means you can probably find things a whole lot easier. How many times do people lose their keys?....... Think about it. If people had an organized room, all they would have to do is open a drawer and take their keys out. With an organized life you will never be late to a meeting or miss out on half of the lesson in school again (Panzer).
Having a clean room does not only helps you get places on time, but it can also make people feel good and look good. It has been proven that keeping a clean room can make you look and feel great. This is because having a decluttered room can bring down your stress levels and help you go to sleep with a happier and calmer mindset. With this mindset, you can sleep more restfully, and we all know the key to beauty is a peaceful rest. As people always say we all need our beauty rest ( Gustina). Additionally, with a good nightʻs rest you are more likely to feel good when you wake up.
Letʻs be real, you're probably embarrassed at the state of your bedroom right now and you don't want anyone to come in it. Well, when you have a clean room then you don't have to be ashamed and worried about what people think (Panzer). This meaning that having a clean room can make you more social.
Some people may argue that having a dirty room can make you more creative, however having a clean room has many more benefits. Having a clean room may make you more creative, but how can you be creative if you can't find things to be creative with in your messy room?
If people don't keep a clean room they may miss out on the benefits. They may experience unneeded stress, and they may not act or look their best. It is obvious that people should start keeping their rooms clean.
I agree with what you said when you are organized and have a clean room you can just open a drawer and take the keys out of there. When you donʻt have a clean room you have to literally make sure that you look good because your keys can be anywhere. I like how in all your paragraphs you restated one of the things you said in your introduction. You might consider restating your words in a different way so everything isnʻt the same throughout the whole essay.
ReplyDeleteI disagree because some people really would rather have a dirty room and that works for them.
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